电气疯狂两周的第一天

很好~早八点到晚八点的课，中间还跑了个800米~

我们的生活真是充实啊！！！！

今天无论如何都要写一篇issue出来

不写出来就不睡觉了

虽然我知道 我还有一份厚厚的实验报告要抄，据说抄也要抄3个小时，我被吓到了T_T

还有明天的电气作业要“做”，据说16章除了2道题，其余都要做- -|||这个老师还真会布置作业啊

恩~很好

明天第一节菊姐姐的继电保护课还不能迟到，并且还要爬四楼

我一直都不觉得E楼远，但却觉得4楼很遥远

貌似我已经很久没有看过我的继保笔记了

 

好吧~我承认我有点慌了~

恩~ 不过当一切过去，一切也都会好起来的

就像我在过去这么多年来遇到的所有事情一样

就像今天跑完800米一样

旖旎说得好，她正是想着这是她这辈子最后一次跑800米了才把最后一圈跑完的

恩~ 我们旖旎很有突破！并且还能去上接下来的电机拖动

恩~ 我的最后一次800米~ 也很值得纪念~

让我知道我还没有老，呵呵~

TOPIC: ARGUMENT51 - The following appeared in a medical newsletter.

 

"Doctors have long suspected that secondary infections may keep some patients from healing quickly after severe muscle strain. This hypothesis has now been proved by preliminary results of a study of two groups of patients. The first group of patients, all being treated for muscle injuries by Dr. Newland, a doctor who specializes in sports medicine, took antibiotics regularly throughout their treatment. Their recuperation time was, on average, 40 percent quicker than typically expected. Patients in the second group, all being treated by Dr. Alton, a general physician, were given sugar pills, although the patients believed they were taking antibiotics. Their average recuperation time was not significantly reduced. Therefore, all patients who are diagnosed with muscle strain would be well advised to take antibiotics as part of their treatment."

WORDS: 595          TIME: 0:30:00          DATE: 2009-3-27

 

In this argument, the author asserts that all patients who are diagnosed with muscle strain had better take antibiotics in order to get a more rapidly recover rates. To substantiate this proposal, the author points out that secondary infections are long suspected to keep severe muscle strain patients from healing quickly. Moreover, the author also cites a study done among a group of patients, who are divided into two groups with different treatment-- have or not have antibiotics, to demonstrate the hypothesis. These alone however do not constitute a logical argument in favor of its conclusion and few provide convincing supports to make this argument sound and invulnerable.

 

In the first place, no evidence is provided in the argument that whether the secondary infections will really happen in the case of muscle strain. It is very likely not the case. However, the author fails to provide direct evidence that secondary infections may occurs among the patients with muscle strain or even whether they are likely to be infected.

 

In the second place, as for the study the author cited to support his recommendation, no evidence is provided to show that these patients are representatives of all the patients with severe muscle strain. In all likelihood, these patients may of the same gender or race. If true, it will narrow the conclusion's application. It is also likely that most of the patients are of the same age range, say 30 to 40, or so. In addition, the number of the participants is not included as well. In short, without better evidence that the study statistically reliable the author cannot rely on it to draw any firm conclusions.

 

In the third place, even assuming that the sample of the study is selected both sufficiently and randomly, the author assumes too hastily that antibiotics will necessarily result in the quicker recover of the patients with severe muscle strain, while overlooking a myriad of other factors which will also contribute to lead the consequence of quicker recovery. For example, the patients in the second group may have a more severe muscle train than the patients in the first group. Moreover the two doctor who are responsible for each group may differ the level of treatment. As cited by in the argument, the doctor of the first group is specialized in sports medicine, while the other is a general physician. It is very likely that the doctor in charge of the first group is more experienced in treating the muscle strain. Without ruling out these and other possible factors, the author cannot convince me with the conclusion that it is the antibiotics that contribute to the quicker recovery.

 

In the forth place, even if the antibiotics really result in quicker recovery, the author gratuitous concluded that all patients who are diagnosed with muscle strain should take antibiotics. As we all know, antibiotics may cause many side effects while function as an impetus to recovery. It is entirely possible that the side effects that the antibiotics causing may make the condition of patience worse. Without weighing advantages against disadvantages, the author’s advise is premature at best.

 

To sum up, the author fails to substantiate his claim that all patients with muscle strain had better take antibiotics as part of their treatment. To make it more convincing, more information with regard to the conclusion should be included: (1) the possibility of the patient’s getting secondary infection; (2) a more scientific study which is conducted under the same doctor, among the patients with same injury lever and in the same environment as well.

TOPIC: ARGUMENT53 - Thirteen years ago, researchers studied a group of 25 infants who showed signs of mild distress when exposed to unfamiliar stimuli such as an unusual odor or a tape recording of an unknown voice. They discovered that these infants were more likely than other infants to have been conceived in early autumn, a time when their mothers' production of melatonin-a hormone known to affect some brain functions-would naturally increase in response to decreased daylight. In a follow-up study conducted earlier this year, more than half of these children-now teenagers-who had shown signs of distress identified themselves as shy. Clearly, increased levels of melatonin before birth cause shyness during infancy and this shyness continues into later life.

WORDS: 604          TIME: 0:60:00          DATE: 2009-3-25

 

In this argument, the author asserts that increase levels of melatonin before birth is responsible for both infancy-period and later-life shyness. To substantiate this assertion, the author cites a research done in a group of 25 infants, among which who were more sensitive to the exposure of unfamiliar sitimuli were mostly concieved in autumn when melatonin-a begin to increase in the women’s body. Moreover, he indicates that melatonin-a hormone has some affect on brain functions. In addition, a recent follow-up study is cited to demonstrate that the influence of this kind of hormone can last life long. This alone however cannot constitute a logical argument in favor of its conclusion and few to provide convincing supports to make this argument sound and invulnerable.

 

In the first place, as for the research of 25 infants, no evidence is provided to show that the results are reliable. In all likelihood, the infants are chosen from a small region or even from the same hospital, thus the result cannot represent the actual condition of all newborn babies. It is also possible that most of 25 infants were conceived in autumn. If either case is true, it will be bound to undermine the author's assertion. Moreover, even if the research selected the sample randomly, the author unfairly assumed that the mild distresses shown by infants were caused by nothing but shyness.  It is entirely possible that the infants who shown signs of mild distress only out of physical discomfort or just because of losing mother’s accompany. In short, without considering and ruling out alternative explanations for the study’s results, the author cannot justifiably conclude that the result due to the fact that all infants show distress because of shyness.

 

In the second place, merely based on the fact that the malatonin-a has something to do with influencing brain function and the infants who are sensitive to the unfamiliar condition mostly conceived when the hormone increases in mother’s bodies, the author asserts that malatonin-a is responsible for shyness of infants. However, this is not necessarily the case. Though the malatonin-a affects the brain function, the author provides no evidence that whether it may have influence on both mother and child. Moreover, many factors other than melatonin-a hormone can results in shyness. Perhaps, other hormone plays a more significant role in causing shyness of infants which hadn’t been found due to the research’s lacking scientific mechanism. It is also possible that the given food or living environment has impact on the infants. Without eliminating these possibilities, the author cannot convince me with the assumption that it is melatonin-a hormone rather than other factors that result in the shyness of infants.

 

In the third place, by relying on the fact that more than half of the children who had shown distress identified themselves as shyness, the author concludes that the infect of melatonin can continue into later life. Yet no evidence is offered to substantiate this conclusion. To our common knowledge, many factors in the processing of grownup will contribute to the constitution of characters. For example, the family educations and living environment. However, the author gets to his conclusion without considering the important relating aspects, which makes his assumption unconvincing as it stands.

 

To sum up, the author fails to substantiate his claim that no other than the melationin-a results in the shyness of people. Rather than relying solely on questionable research, the author should provide direct evidence that the research was done in a scientific way. To make it more convincing, more information with regard to the conclusion, such as the family backgrounds and grownup processings should be included.

everything old can be new again - -|||  From goosip girl~

a new circulation is around corner

which is too hard to comprehend any more

Your view on yourself:You are intelligent, honest and sweet. You are friendly to everybody and don't like conflict. Because you're so cheerful and fun people are naturally attracted to you and like to talk to you.

The type of girlfriend/boyfriend you are looking for:You are a true romantic. When you are in love, you will do anything and everything to keep your love true.

Your readiness to commit to a relationship:You prefer to get to know a person very well before deciding whether you will commit to the relationship.

The seriousness of your love:You are very serious about relationships and aren't interested in wasting time with people you don't really like. If you meet the right person, you will fall deeply and beautifully in love.

Your views on educationEducation is very important in life. You want to study hard and learn as much as you can.

The right job for you:You have many goals and want to achieve as much as you can. The jobs you enjoy are those that let you burn off your considerable excess energy.

How do you view success:Success in your career is not the most important thing in life. You are content with what you have and think that being with someone you love is more than spending all of your precious time just working.

What are you most afraid of:You are afraid of things that you cannot control. Sometimes you show your anger to cover up how you feel.

Who is your true self:You like privacy very much because you enjoy spending time with your own thoughts. You like to disappear when you cannot find solutions to your own problems, but you would feel better if you learned to share your thoughts with a person you trust.

觉得这篇东西的逻辑错误太多了，所以反而写不好~

因为考虑得太多，排列了很久还是没写成我想写的全文让步式~

开始用一种我最不喜欢的 但很有效的模板法写了自己的第二篇argument

当然用的是自己的模板template template

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6.The following was written as a part of an application for a small

business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.

"A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable

enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away; thus,

our proposed club, the C Note, would have the local market all to itself.

Plus, jazz is extremely popular in Monroe: over 100,000 people

attended Monroe's jazz festival last summer, several well-known

jazz musicians live in Monroe, and the highest-rated radio program

 in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight. Finally, a

nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close

to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment. It is clear that the C

Note cannot help but make money."

Merely based on the dubious evidence that Monroe has a large potential market and unfounded assumption that the condition of last year will last, the arguer draw the conclusion that a jazz music club like C Note will be bound to be profitable enterprise. At first glance, this argument appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveal that it omits some substantial concerns which should be addressed in this argument. From the logical prospective, this argument suffer from several logical flaws.

 

In the application, the author cites a statistics that over 100,000 people attended Monroe’s jazz festival last summer. Yet it has not mentioned that where the attendees come from. A large-scaled festival such as Woodstock Rock Festival usually attracts crowds from all over the regions to the host place. It is entirely possible that the vast majority of the attendees are out-of-town visitors. Unfortunately, the author hasn’t shown us the related information. Even if the majority of the attendees are the residents of the Monroe, whether the trend will last is still a question needs doubting.

 

Secondly, the author confuses people who love jazz with those who love to go to the jazz club. As we all known, people usually listen to music by them own just to have a rest or relive themselves from stressful works and lives. Therefore, it is possibility that people who love jazz would prefer staying home listening to the radio to going out to hear the live music in a noisy club. Just as the author mentioned in the application, there is a popular radio program, the ‘Jazz Nightly’, available in Monroe, which may compete with the club and diminish the customers. And that may be the reason why there is no jazz club in 65 miles’ circumference.

 

Thirdly, the author applies a nationwide survey result to Monroe, yet this might not be the case. Perhaps the living standard in Monroe is much more lower than the national average, thus the residents there would not spend that much on the jazz entertainment. Even assuming that the jazz fans are willing to spend that much on the jazz entertainment, it is not necessarily that they will invest their money in the jazz club. They may be apt to buy the albums and tickets of vocal concerts rather than the entry and drink of the club.

 

Finally, even if the market of Monroe is that optimistic as the author considered, the prediction that C Note is unwarranted profit is a factor relating to not only market prospect but also management. A company without a proper management, even enjoying a prosperous market will result in nothing but bankrupt. However, in the application the author fails to mention the important aspect， which made the application less convincing.

 

In conclusion, the arguer fails to substantiate his application that a jazz music club like C Note will be bound to be profitable enterprise. Because the evidence cited in this argument does not lend strong support to what the author maintain. To make this argument more convincing the author would have to provide more information regarding the conclusion.

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88. In many countries it is now possible to turn on the television and view government at work. Watching these proceedings can help people understand the issues that affect their lives. The more kinds of government proceedings—trials, debates, meetings, etc. —that are televised, the more society will benefit.(3.18)

 

Broadcasting the government proceedings is a great progress in democracy without question, however, whether it is a thing that the more the better still needs doubting. In my opinion, informing the constituency by means of television, while providing people with the lively government proceedings, such as trials, debates, meetings, has not yet done enough to solve the basic problem lay in front of both the authority and its constituency—people’s participation in political process, at the same time, bring about the security issues.

 

Admittedly, broadcasting the proceedings of government is a notable step in the process of democracy, and it benefits people and the whole society a lot in many aspects. Firstly, it provides a more convenient and direct access for constituency to the operation of the nation machine. People who want to know how it is going on can easily get the information by turning on the television. To some extent, it improved the equality by offering the same opportunity of being informed. No matter who you are, a shut-in or a senate, can enjoy the same priority to get the information. Moreover, since the government proceedings are being broadcasting via television, there are little chances that things like bribe will take place, which improves the probity and clarity of the government.

 

However, undue exposure of the government proceedings will arise tremendous problems. Although democracy means the people participation in politic decisions and affairs, the government still needs some space for secrets and confidential information, for example, the military affairs such as where to array the missiles and military forces. If we remove the jurisdiction and expose that by television, it will surely put the whole country in the midst of crisis. Since broadcasted via television, the proceedings can be seen not only by exclusive roles but also by the people both domestic and foreign, which means the national security affairs are exposed to the entire world.

 

Furthermore, undue exposure sometimes results in reverse effect. The tipstaffs or the government officials who take the broadcast too seriously cannot make an objective decision. They are most likely to pass a bill only to cater the audience, which turns government proceedings into a show, or out of the fear for retaliating, meanwhile undermining the justice of the law. On the other hand, excessively relying on and highlighting the informing form of broadcasting will hold back instead of improve the democracy. Because informed by means of television, people can only acquainted themselves with facts rather than express their feelings and ideas, which is much more important for the process of democracy as well as the progress of the government itself.

 

In conclusion, while broadcasting via television originated a new access to the government daily proceedings and facilitated reflecting the performance directly, the hazard of undue implementing should not be ignored. If properly utilized, the mechanism will be the bridge between government and its constituency, which benefits both the authorities and the commonalty.

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You should never be too impressed by people with good manners

They are the ones who give friendly waves even when they stolen from you

They are the typers to sweetly welecome you even as they try to uncover your secrects

They are the kind who offer you the coffee even as they report you to the police

And don't be too offended by someone who is openly rude

because they may be that way for the nicest of reasons

 

 

                                                    -----Desperate housewives season 5 episode 16

 

I am wandering all day~

skiped all the class today

just for preparing myself well for the long-time-no-see sunshine

I should have been happy

since I could finally come back home tomorrow

Here I could say I miss u all

It is different from staying far away

just be happy

though I know there are so....so,,,,many things waiting for me

my motivation letter & my CV

my dear...dear...AW

my dearest GRE

let them all get out of my way

 

 

 

Since I have no plan, so it can not be called a delay. But, actually, I feel the pressure of time.

only one month is left to me

 

Thank God, the rain stops but I don't know whether it will 'refresh' tomorrow.

now cloudy day can be called sunny day - -|||

 

Today's tips:

" We learn from history that men never learn anything from history." ---- Hegel

So I choose today's issure topic ' history as for today'

 

I found I read just for reading when I am reading

Before I start it, I have some purposes, however, when I read, I totally forget.

 

To accomplish a whole essay is a 'huge' task for me now, so I decided to start from some litter paragraphs.

 

Also some tips to remaind myself of how to write a good paragraph:

1. Unity

2. Coherence

3. Transition

way to developing paragraphs:

Time

Process

Space

Example and Generalization

Comparison and Contrast

Cause and Effect

Classification

Definition

 

Here, the things I listed above let me think of someone ^_^ the teacher I like most in SJTU.

When I was reading the handbook of writing, I found everything in book had been emphsized by him.

Just as ma belle-mème said after she took the AW test.

 

I restarted reading to find some good supporting ideas for topics

and planned to recite several essays

therefore delay my writing plan

 

P.S. pray for the stop of the continuous rain

 

Enfin...

I started my AW

A nice metaphor, thank u everyone

"Sometimes you just need to shoot the ball, not to care whether it will score."

 

And...

Little study tips

Effective Sentences:

1. Unity

2. Coherence

3. Conciseness

4. Emphasis

5. Variety

 

Good luck to all the gre-er ^_^

 

211. .The following appeared in a memorandum to faculty from the academic
vice president of Waymarsh University.

"So that we can better accomplish Waymarsh University's academic goals, we
should adopt the job-opportunity (job-op) program offered at Plateau
Technical College and strongly encourage all students at Waymarsh to
participate in it. The success of the job-op program at Plateau is
evident: over the past two years, more than 75% of the freshmen at Plateau
have enrolled in the optional job-op program. Moreover, at Plateau, the
grades of job-op students are consistently higher than those of other
students, 90% of the job-op students receive job offers within a month
after their graduation, and most former job-op students report much
success in their careers."

 

Merely based on the dubious evidence that job-opportunity program got success at Plateau Technical College and unfounded assumption that the program will also be effective at Waymarsh University, the arguer draw the conclusion that we should adopt the job-op program just as Plateau Technical College. At first glance, this argument appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveal that it omits some substantial concerns which should be addressed in this argument. From the logical prospective, this argument suffer from 3 logical flaws.

 

In the memorandum, the arguer cites the statistics of a survey that 90% of the job-op students get job offers within a month after their graduation. Yet it hasn't mentioned that whether the job is satisfied or not. As we all know, for a student graduate from college, get a job is not difficult, but it is rather difficult to get a satisfied or even major related job. Unfortunately, the arguer hasn't shown us the related information. Even if 90% of the job-op students all got a sound job, whether the job-op program made contribution is still a question needs to be doubt. Perhaps, the employed rate in Plateau Technical College was also very high before the implement of this program. And there are also possibility that Plateau Technical college enforced their teaching quality, so the graduates are more competitive in the job market.

 

secondly, the arguer make a false analogy by neglecting the difference between the Waymarsh university and Plateau Technical College. From the name of the two school, we can easily tell the distinguish. Plateau Technical College specializes in science and technology while Waymarsh university is an all-around university. As a result the program that suit the Plateau Technical College will not necessarily be suitable to Waymarsh. Therefore just copy the program of Plateau can hardly ensure the success.

 

Finally, The arguer recommend that all the students should participate in this program, which is unreasonable. Firstly, is it necessary? Not all the students need the help of job direction. Many students are capable of finding a good job themselves, and taking part in the program will inevitably waste their time, which would be more profitable if being used in study. Moreover, is it viable? Commanding that all the students should participate, the school must invest a lot of money and spirits not only in faculty but also in equipments as well. Last but not lest, whether the students will be wishful to take part remains unknown.

 

In conclusion, the arguer fails to substantiate his recommendation that we should adopt the job-op program just as Plateau Technical College. Because the evidence cited in this argument does not lend strong support to what the arguer maintain. To make this argument more convincing the author would have to provide more information regarding the conclusion.